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Struggling with low conversions? Learn 5 tips for writing product descriptions that connect with readers and drive more affiliate sales.
If you’ve ever stared at a blank screen, trying to figure out how to describe a product in a way that actually gets people to click, you’re not alone. Writing about something you don’t own or ship yourself can feel tricky because you have to rely on words to convince your audience. And those words? They need to spark interest, answer questions, and make someone trust you enough to buy.
That’s the real power of a good product description. When it’s written well, it becomes more than text on a page – it’s a quiet salesperson working for you around the clock, building confidence and nudging readers toward action.
So how do you get there? In this post, we’ll walk through five practical tips that will help affiliate marketers write descriptions people connect with. You’ll learn how to highlight real value, speak to your readers’ needs, and ultimately turn more clicks into commissions.
What Is a Product Description?
We’re sure you’re excited for the tips to come, but before we get into it – especially if you’re a new affiliate or still figuring things out – let’s pause for a quick refresher. If you’re not yet sure what a product description really is, here’s a simple and clear definition:
A product description is a short piece of writing that explains what a product is, what it does, and why someone should care about it. It’s a chance to connect those features to real benefits your readers will appreciate.
A great product description is:
- Clear and easy to read – no jargon or confusing language.
- Benefit-driven – it shows how the product makes life easier or better.
- Persuasive without being pushy – it builds trust instead of sounding like a sales pitch.
- Formatted for skimming – because most readers don’t have the patience for long blocks of text.
Think of it as your opportunity to guide someone from “I’m curious” to “This is exactly what I need.”
Why Affiliates Need to Write Good Product Descriptions
As an affiliate, you already know how much work it takes to bring someone to your site – writing blog posts, optimizing for SEO, sharing on social, maybe even running ads. That’s no small task. But, even after they land on your page, you still need to get them to take action – a well-written product description is what you need.
Still wondering why it’s worth the extra effort? Here’s what a strong product description can do for you:
- They make the most of your traffic. Every visitor is valuable, and a good description keeps them from bouncing away. Readers are more likely to click through when the product feels relevant to their needs.
- They boost conversions. When descriptions focus on real benefits – as opposed to a dry list of features – readers feel confident they’re making the right choice. That confidence translates directly into more sales.
- They set you apart from the crowd. Many promoters copy-paste whatever the vendor provides. By writing your own descriptions, you show readers you’ve taken the time to understand the product, and that extra effort makes your recommendations more trustworthy.
- They build long-term trust. A reader who feels informed and guided, rather than “sold to,” is more likely to return for your future content. Over time, your words position you as a trusted advisor.
- They lead to consistent earnings. Better engagement, stronger trust, and higher conversions all add up. When your descriptions work, your commissions grow steadily and reliably.
5 Tips for Writing Product Descriptions That Convert
Now that you know why product descriptions play such a big role in your affiliate success, let’s get into the practical part – how to write them well.
The goal is to craft words that catch attention, build trust, and inspire action.
Thankfully, you don’t have to be a copywriting pro to make this work. With a few simple strategies, you can turn ordinary blurbs into descriptions that connect with readers and drive more clicks through your links.
Here are five tips to help you write product descriptions that convert.
Tip 1 – Highlight the Reader’s Problem (and Your Solution)
The fastest way to connect with your audience is to show them you understand what they’re struggling with. A great product description doesn’t start with features; it starts with the problem the reader wants solved. When someone feels like you “get” their pain point, they’re much more likely to pay attention to what you recommend.
For example, instead of writing:
“This software comes with built-in automation tools.”
You could say:
“Tired of spending hours on repetitive tasks? This software automates the boring stuff, so you can focus on growing your business.”
See the difference? One is just a feature, the other ties that feature to a real problem your reader faces – and positions the product as the solution.
As an affiliate, this approach is gold because you’re showing readers why it matters to them. When readers see their challenge reflected in your description, clicking through feels like the natural next step.
Tip 2 – Use Specific, Benefit-Focused Language
Vague words don’t sell. Telling readers a product is “fast,” “easy,” or “powerful” doesn’t mean much on its own. What people really want to know is: Fast compared to what? Easy in what way? Powerful enough to do what for me?
That’s where benefit-focused language comes in. Instead of listing features, show the real outcomes your readers care about. For example:
- Instead of saying: “This tool is fast.”
- Say: “This tool delivers results in under 5 minutes, saving you hours of manual work every week.”
See how much more persuasive that feels? In the second example, you’re showing the difference it will make in your reader’s life or business.
By framing your descriptions around benefits, your content becomes more engaging, and your readers can envision the results they’ll get, which is key to getting them to click.
Tip 3 – Create Clear, Persuasive CTAs
A strong description grabs attention, but it’s the call-to-action (CTA) that tells readers what to do next. Without a clear CTA, even the best copy can fall flat. Think of it as the final nudge that moves someone from interested to ready to click.
The best CTAs are action-oriented and specific. Instead of a bland “Click Here,” try phrases that highlight value and urgency, like:
- “Get My Free Trial”
- “See the Best Price”
- “Claim Your Discount Now”
It’s also worth paying attention to how your CTA looks and where it sits on the page. Buttons that stand out visually, use compelling color contrasts, and are placed where readers naturally look (directly under your description) tend to perform better.
The clearer and more persuasive your CTA, the less friction there is between interest and action – and that’s what drives clicks and conversions.
Tip 4 – Leverage Social Proof and Trust Signals
People are more likely to buy when they see that others already have. That’s the power of social proof. Reviews, star ratings, testimonials, or even a simple “best-seller” tag can be the difference between a reader scrolling past or clicking through with confidence.
As someone recommending products, you don’t have the benefit of a physical store where buyers can touch, test, or ask questions. What you do have is the ability to showcase trust signals that reduce hesitation and add credibility to your recommendations. Even small touches, like highlighting positive feedback or noting how many people use the product, help reassure readers they’re making a smart choice.
When readers feel confident that others trust the product and that you’re being transparent they’re far more likely to click your link and follow through.
Tip 5 – Use Visuals and Structured Formatting
Even the best copy can get lost if it’s crammed into long, heavy paragraphs. Readers skim. That’s why structure matters just as much as the words themselves.
Use bullet points to break down key benefits, bold headings to draw attention to what’s important, and short, punchy paragraphs that make your content easy to digest.
Pairing your descriptions with visuals is another powerful way to keep readers engaged. A product image, a clean layout, or a neatly designed section around your copy makes it easier for people to connect with what you’re recommending. The easier it is to read and understand, the more likely they are to take action.
With strong formatting and the right visuals, your descriptions stop looking like filler text and start working like polished sales assets – making it much easier for your readers to click with confidence.
And if you’re wondering how to bring all these elements together seamlessly, you’ll find the answer in the next section, where we’ll introduce you to ThirstyAffiliates Product Displays.
How to Write Product Descriptions that Convert with ThirstyAffiliates
By now, you’ve seen how much effort goes into writing a product description that really works – highlighting the problem, focusing on benefits, adding trust signals, and structuring your copy so it’s easy to read. But even with all that in place, plain text can only go so far. Readers expect more than a link dropped into a paragraph. They want an experience that feels like shopping.
That’s exactly what ThirstyAffiliates Product Displays does for you.
Instead of leaving your words on their own, Product Displays transform your affiliate links into visual showcases that combine everything you’ve just learned about great descriptions:
- Clarity at a glance – Product images, pricing, and benefit-driven text displayed together make it easy for readers to understand why the product matters.
- Persuasive CTAs built in – No extra coding or plugins required. Just customize your button text and color to guide readers to click.
- Trust signals baked in – Add badges to highlight best-sellers, sales, or top picks, and even include your affiliate disclosure right in the display for transparency.
- Easy-to-read formatting – Structured layouts replace walls of text with clean, skimmable designs that match how people shop online.
Think of it as the bridge between your copy and your reader’s decision. You’ve written the words that connect with their needs; now Product Displays packages those words with visuals and structure that make taking action feel effortless.
And best of all, you don’t need design skills, complicated tools, or endless tweaking. ThirstyAffiliates does the heavy lifting so your descriptions look professional, persuasive, and consistent every time.
There's still so much more you need to know about this feature. Learn more about it here, head to the Product Displays documentation for a step-by-step guide, or you can watch the detailed video below.
If writing good product descriptions is the what, Product Displays are the how. They’re the easiest way to put all your hard work into action and watch more of your clicks turn into commissions.
Wrap-Up and Quick Recap
Writing product descriptions that convert isn’t about stuffing in features or flowery words – it’s about connecting with your readers and showing them why they need the product. Let’s quickly recap the five tips we covered:
- Focus on solving reader problems – Show you understand what they’re struggling with and present the product as the solution.
- Be specific and benefit-focused – Swap vague features for clear, outcome-driven benefits.
- Use persuasive CTAs – Tell readers exactly what to do next with action-oriented language.
- Add trust signals – Reviews, badges, and transparency all help boost credibility.
- Leverage visuals and structure – Make descriptions easy to scan and engaging to look at.
Put these strategies into practice, and you’ll notice a difference in how your readers respond. And if you’re ready to take things to the next level, give ThirstyAffiliates Product Displays a try. They combine all of these best practices – benefits, CTAs, trust signals, and clean formatting – into one powerful, easy-to-use tool.
This feature is available with the ThirstyAffiliates WordPress plugin, so once you’ve purchased and set it up, you’ll be ready to go.
Now it’s your turn: apply these tips to your next post and see how your audience reacts. Did your conversions improve? Share your results in the comments – we’d love to hear how these strategies are working for you.
